Comments on: 06/28/2009 http://www.xyliatales.com/06282009/ Just another WordPress site Tue, 07 Feb 2012 07:01:57 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Nomi http://www.xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-3414 Nomi Fri, 28 Jan 2011 14:40:45 +0000 http://xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-3414 Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. Or fire, for that matter. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.
Or fire, for that matter.

]]> By: michelle4jerusalem http://www.xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1771 michelle4jerusalem Thu, 02 Jul 2009 13:53:04 +0000 http://xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1771 agreed - free editorial feedback can be obnoxious to some creators (who refuse to fix the problems on principle!), but it is one of the benefits to online comics before they go print. speaking of which, i ADORE the xylia/star trek vote incentive and who would not - non-xylia readers would vote for you if they knew what they'd be getting! but...there's a typo there. fascinating has an s in it. if you don't want our pedantic corrections but want it done right, paste the dialog into a word doc or in a firefox window before pasting it into your image file and the red-underlined words will offer automatic suggestions when you right click. agreed – free editorial feedback can be obnoxious to some creators (who refuse to fix the problems on principle!), but it is one of the benefits to online comics before they go print. speaking of which, i ADORE the xylia/star trek vote incentive and who would not – non-xylia readers would vote for you if they knew what they’d be getting! but…there’s a typo there. fascinating has an s in it. if you don’t want our pedantic corrections but want it done right, paste the dialog into a word doc or in a firefox window before pasting it into your image file and the red-underlined words will offer automatic suggestions when you right click.

]]> By: naomi http://www.xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1770 naomi Wed, 01 Jul 2009 00:22:45 +0000 http://xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1770 so why should not hit her really hared ilke that and she got mad becus he did so why should not hit her really hared ilke that and she got mad becus he did

]]> By: Chameleon Kid http://www.xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1769 Chameleon Kid Tue, 30 Jun 2009 08:42:10 +0000 http://xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1769 Eat pixie dust! XD Eat pixie dust! XD

]]> By: CaliforniaDave http://www.xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1768 CaliforniaDave Tue, 30 Jun 2009 08:32:23 +0000 http://xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1768 And now the claws come out. More than anything else, Tychia needs a major spanking. And now the claws come out.

More than anything else, Tychia needs a major spanking.

]]> By: Tantz Aerine http://www.xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1767 Tantz Aerine Tue, 30 Jun 2009 08:17:59 +0000 http://xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1767 Thank you for continuing to make Claudius every girl's dream guy. XD Thank you for continuing to make Claudius every girl’s dream guy. XD

]]> By: OctoDude http://www.xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1766 OctoDude Mon, 29 Jun 2009 23:56:05 +0000 http://xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1766 Sweet, fiery color! Yay, Claude!! You kick that bum! Hope you feel better soon, B - take care o' yo' self! Sweet, fiery color!

Yay, Claude!! You kick that bum!

Hope you feel better soon, B – take care o’ yo’ self!

]]> By: PrairieGhost http://www.xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1765 PrairieGhost Mon, 29 Jun 2009 19:03:22 +0000 http://xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1765 lol but I thought we WERE your proofreaders, Barb! lol but I thought we WERE your proofreaders, Barb!

]]> By: Tinkerwrks http://www.xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1764 Tinkerwrks Mon, 29 Jun 2009 18:54:43 +0000 http://xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1764 Take her down Claude! Take her down Claude!

]]> By: Melvar http://www.xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1763 Melvar Mon, 29 Jun 2009 17:37:03 +0000 http://xyliatales.com/06282009/#comment-1763 Also typo at “difficult” and possibly “ ’o’ ” rather than “ o’ ”, not sure, but if it should be a contraction of “have”, both “h” and “ve” are replaced by unwritten glottal stops with the “a” changed into “o”. I’m not so sure about the grammar of the last sentence either. Plus, you should check the apostrophe at “ ’ave ”, I think it came out as “ ‘ave ”. Where we can look through the loop of Tychia’s Poii gem in panel three, there seems to be some shadow or darkness missing. Either you made uncharacteristically many mistakes, or I did (which is possible). Also typo at “difficult” and possibly “ ’o’ ” rather than “ o’ ”, not sure, but if it should be a contraction of “have”, both “h” and “ve” are replaced by unwritten glottal stops with the “a” changed into “o”. I’m not so sure about the grammar of the last sentence either. Plus, you should check the apostrophe at “ ’ave ”, I think it came out as “ ‘ave ”.
Where we can look through the loop of Tychia’s Poii gem in panel three, there seems to be some shadow or darkness missing.
Either you made uncharacteristically many mistakes, or I did (which is possible).

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